You've got some great stuff happening here. I love the rim lighting coming from the moon. Very nice! I am a little confused at all the green stuff coming out of the mouth of the llama. It's almost more toxic than bodily fluids. To be nit picky, that llama wouldn't be standing too long with its left back leg missing and its right back leg still in the current position. If you move it over a bit more and widen the front legs, you'll give it more of a realistic stance. Nice job overall.
Cool idea, Emily! I think you have a great (and original and disgusting in a good way) idea! I like the rendering and textures. My critique would be the following. It would nice to have seen more of a difference in textures between the critters and the environment. I know you were a victim of your materials, but it would have worked a bit better. Also, the area of greatest contrast is in the sky. It would have been nice to see the lighting on the animals pushed to pop them out of the BG a bit more and the sky pushed back a bit. Nice job though.
Hey Emily! Whenever you have a three legged zombie llama with it's insides hanging out, spewing toxic goo... you know you are working with something pretty special. Ha. I really like this idea, and the visual gag with the dog scampering away with the leg. Nice work. Even though I love that the leg in the dog's mouth looks like a ham from a Tom and Jerry short (high praise) it might have read better if it looked "ripped" from the llama. The leg should match the stump. Ha Also, I think you meant for the llama to be spitting up a batch of toxic goo? Right now it looks a bit like he is chewing some toxic grass, just because of the way it is "hanging" out of the mouth. It should either hang straight down as liquid would fall, or maybe launch forward as only puke can. ;) Overall, a very nice piece. Nice work.
Wow, what a ghastly/funny drawing. I like it! I think I'd get rid of the toxic goo, though. It reads more as "grass" than "goo" to me. Also, I would like to see the light and shadows on the animals pushed a bit for an even creepier vibe.
I'm not sure what I can add to what's already been said. The llama is off balance, so pay attention to the posing. You did a good job with the lighting. Pencil crayons are a tough medium, so kudos.
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Gross! Nicely done. People forget about animals and what will become of them post-apocalypse, but not you guys. All over the animals.
You've got some great stuff happening here. I love the rim lighting coming from the moon. Very nice! I am a little confused at all the green stuff coming out of the mouth of the llama. It's almost more toxic than bodily fluids. To be nit picky, that llama wouldn't be standing too long with its left back leg missing and its right back leg still in the current position. If you move it over a bit more and widen the front legs, you'll give it more of a realistic stance. Nice job overall.
Cool idea, Emily! I think you have a great (and original and disgusting in a good way) idea! I like the rendering and textures. My critique would be the following. It would nice to have seen more of a difference in textures between the critters and the environment. I know you were a victim of your materials, but it would have worked a bit better. Also, the area of greatest contrast is in the sky. It would have been nice to see the lighting on the animals pushed to pop them out of the BG a bit more and the sky pushed back a bit. Nice job though.
Hey Emily! Whenever you have a three legged zombie llama with it's insides hanging out, spewing toxic goo... you know you are working with something pretty special. Ha. I really like this idea, and the visual gag with the dog scampering away with the leg. Nice work. Even though I love that the leg in the dog's mouth looks like a ham from a Tom and Jerry short (high praise) it might have read better if it looked "ripped" from the llama. The leg should match the stump. Ha Also, I think you meant for the llama to be spitting up a batch of toxic goo? Right now it looks a bit like he is chewing some toxic grass, just because of the way it is "hanging" out of the mouth. It should either hang straight down as liquid would fall, or maybe launch forward as only puke can. ;) Overall, a very nice piece. Nice work.
Wow, what a ghastly/funny drawing. I like it! I think I'd get rid of the toxic goo, though. It reads more as "grass" than "goo" to me. Also, I would like to see the light and shadows on the animals pushed a bit for an even creepier vibe.
Still, a nice job! Very funny.
Stephanie Gladden
Hey Emily!
nice color pencil work,
However, when you adjusted the most suitable trimming layout for this art, It would become more cool dynamic image!
I'm not sure what I can add to what's already been said. The llama is off balance, so pay attention to the posing. You did a good job with the lighting. Pencil crayons are a tough medium, so kudos.
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